Response to "...Jim"

This story was a bit too sad for me. A man finally telling a woman that he loves her but it being too late. I feel like I have seen this before, its depressing. Their relationship was ever changing, creating a crazy story that you cant seem to look away from. As for the writing, i thought it was good style. To me it was nothing amazing but it kept me reading and in my book, thats good.

Response to Zaragoza

Well, the poems were good. I enjoyed reading them in both languages, it was a fun contrast especially for one that is studying Spanish. I tried doing some research on these poems and i didnt find much. The fifth of may is obviously Cinco de Mayo. A day of celebration in Mexico. The celebration is in response to a fight once battled. I found that there was a General Zaragoza, chances are they are the same. Cool. Good poems though and its a shame i couldn't find more about them.